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There are two lovers who went to ski. They stop in a petrol station to buy a coffe. While Tom is shopping Charlotte stays in the car. Charlotte finds a bag with a lot of money and she is very surprised. At the same time the boy is buying gomys, coffe and a mobil phone and Charlotte finds a letter who says that Tom killed her wife and they are going to Brasil.
Marina i Clàudia.
It's ten o'clock, Sean stops in a petrol station to repose after a hard travel while Mary is waiting in his car.
Mary doesn't know him well, and she has curiosity about him.
While he has a coffe, she see in the Sean's bag and finds a lot of money.
Concerned, she open the glove compartment and takes the car's documents... Surprise: Sean isn't Sean, he has another name, and this mean a lot of lies.
Melissa Guerreiro
Jaume Vicheto says:
Once upon a time in Missisipi, in the state of Missouri in USA, there was one man. That man went to a stop area to buy a coffe. In the car that he went, there was his girlfriend, at the same time that he was buying somthing to eat, the girl started to inspeccionate a bag that there was in the car, she saw there a lot of money, next she locked at the vahicle registation, she saw that the vehicle wasn't a propiety of her boyfriend.
In conclusion she thought that the man was a criminal, a very dangerous criminal...
Next the woman cathced all of money, and scaped with the car.
Two months later, she went to live i Hawai with all of money, that she stole, and never had known nothing of the man.
Once upon a time Tina and Mike were going home and at halfway they stopped in a petrol station because Mike wanted to buy some food and coffee.
Tina said:
- Mike be fast I'm sleepy.
Tina was waiting for him in the car and she saw a sports bag. She opened it and looked into, she saw a lot of money. Tina was surprised because Mike was a lovely and nice person and he couldn't belive it.
He looked into the car glove box and found a the vehicle registration. She saw a false name. Mike wasn't Mike. When Mike returned to the car she asked him who he was. He started shouting and hitting her. She started crying and she said that she was going to say it to the police department. Two days later the Tina's body was found into the river.
Quim Vilafranca Molero and Natàlia García Monné
Pau Moncusí i Dimitri Kukhtar
It's 25 of october. George and Ashely stop in powerboat. George goes to the shop because he wants to buy coffee, snaks and a mobilphone, while him doughter Ashley is waiting in the car.
Ashley opens the bag and finds a lot of money. Then she looks into the glovebox and wants something to undestand why her father has so much money, but she finds the car's documents and she understands that the car is stolen.
When he returns to the car Asheley talk with her father and he's forced to explain the truth. He tells that her mother is kidnap, and the money is to pay the bailout. The car isn't stolen, he borrowed this car to do the travel.
Hi friends, we are Gerard and Quim.
That story is a detective story.
Roman is a boy and Sara is a girl. Roman lives in Reus, but now he is waiting in a hotel of Barcelona. Because he has to receive an inhearitance. He has a girlfriend, Sara. They go to the shop because he buy a coffe. Sara, see inside the bag Roman's, and she finds a lot of money inside the bag. Sara not to trust him, and she searchs more tracks, and she finds it. Roman isn't know that she find all the money. Roman be aware of that situation and he is obligate to kill Sara. After the die roman goes to reus and he hides in his house because the police want he.
Finally, police capture Roman and he suicidate.
THE END
GERARD MOSQUERA I QUIM SALSENCH
This is a story about a man and his wife. Jack, a young man, starts to move in a criminal world because he has money problems. One day he thinks that he wants to scape of this problematic world, and decided to go away with a lot of black money and his wife, Mary. She thinks that it is a romantic travel. Then, John anb Mary put their bags on the car, and start the travel. When they are a lot of time on the road, John decides to stop a moment for buy a coffe because he is tired to drive. Mary waits on the car. Suddenly she sees a misterious bag. First she ignores it, but finally she opens the bag and she has a enormous surprise. Into this bag there are a lot of money! John doesn't know that Mary sees the bag because he is buying a mobile phone. When John is paying, she opens the glovebox accidentally, and she discovery some papers. When she starts to read, she can see that this papers are of the police. What pretends John?
Izaskun Reyero & Mireia Lázaro
ANNA OLIVÉ ABELLÓ & XINGPENG QIU
THE BAD BOYFRIEND!
Once upon a time, one couple went to the supermarket to buy a phonecard.
The boy went into the supermarket and the girl was waiting inside the car.
While the boy was in the supermarket, the girl was bored and suddenly she saw a bag at the bottom of the car. She opened the bag and she saw 10000000000000000$!!!!!
So she started to search something sospicious, and she found some document of identification in the glovebox of the car. And she could comprove that the car was stolen because her boyfriend wasn't the propietary.
Then, the girl thought a plan. She phoned to the police and she said that a boy stole the car and he is in the supermarket.
After that the girl cought the bag and she started to run. Nobody know where is she!
"Comic strip"
Last week Kate who was in a trip needed someone to take her to London.
She decided to hitch-hike because she didn’t have another means of transport. After one hour of waiting a man stop with his car and she get in.
Suddenly the man decided to stopped because he wanted to buy something in a supermarket . When the man left the car, she heard a mobile phone ringing inside a bag. While the man was buying something to kill Kate, she was searching the mobile phone. She opened the bag where ther are a lot of money and she was surprise so she started to look all the car to find something more. Kate found a document about a rob car and she decided to left the car and phoned the police.
When the man returned to the car, he didn’t found Kate but around his car there was the police who arrested him because he was a terrible killer.
Carla Sanromà i Maria Gené
Poy and Sirolla say:
One saturday of a spring day, Tony and Ana, his girlfriend.
They went to the supermarket to buy something to eat. tony went to the supermarket and Ana stayed in the car. While he was in the supermarket, she saw one bag at the back of the car. He first bought a packet of jerry. In the car she found something very strange in the bag and she got surprise! And she sayed:
-What is this!
And while he was drinking one cup of coffee, she just saw a lot of money in the bag, and started not to trust he. He was buying one new mobile phone, because the police could found him.
Ana started to look for some documents in the car and she found some papers. This documents were the paper of the car and she discovered that that car was stole.
Five minutes later Tony came to the car and Ana and the money weren't in the car.
Tony saw she and started to run over she and whene he caught she, she sayed:
-Stop please don't kill me!
-Don't say silly thigs, I can explain that
-I won't belive you
-I'm a police and I'm working. Please return me the money and go to the car.
Finnaly Ana, sorprised, and Tony went to the car and he sold the case and found the mafia burglars.
A girl takes a taxi , and the driver says to her that he goes to the supermarket to buy some things.
The driver is late in returning to the car, then the girl looks and sees that there is a suitcase and she decides to open it to look what there is inside and she sees that there is a lot of money she doesn’t understand what is all this money and continues searching.
She is looking into the car and she finds a false driving licence, She is scared and doesn’t know what she can do. She decides to pays him and go away.
Ariadna LLort
COMIC
Rob and Mary went away from home, because Rob told Mary that he was argued with her father, but when they are 50 Km far away to them city, Rob, was hungry, and then Rob stopped in a petrol station, for bought something to eat and something more to drink.
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In the same time, Mary (in the car) was bored and then she looking at the back of rob’s car, and she found a bag with a lot of billets, then in the quarry, she also found the papers of the car. The car was stolen!!!!.
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Mary went fast to a police station, and she denounced his boyfriend, but the police didn’t find him.
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Now Rob live in Liverpool with her false name Rudolph and Mary is a farmer.
THE END
Thanks for reading
Lara – Estefania - Pol
Missouri,12 september, 2011
Kate and her brother John takes a rented car for two weeks. The cost of rented are 50$, a very cheap price. When they had 150Km the car stopped, the fuel had finished. John stopped at gas station, he enter to the station and buy a snack's, coffee and one mobile phone. While he was buying, Kate was waiting in the car and she saw a bag, she opened it, she was surprised, the bag was full of money...
She opened the glove compartment box and saw the false document of the car.
Kate caught the car and went to the police, police arrested the man who had hired them the car, the car was stolen and his men was desired release.
Edgar Fornós
1. 16:43 WILL: I'm going to the supermarket, because I need to buy something for eat; so you can wait here, I take only a few minutes.
2. 16:45 SAM: Come on! I'll be late... The exam'll be at 17:00 o'clock! That strange man, I shouldn't ask him to bring me to the exam.
3. 16:46 SAM: What's that? Stop Sam, it's not your matter! although it wouldn't hurt to look a little.
4: 16:46 WILL: Somthing to eat...Where's the coffe machine?
5: 16:48 SAM: What's the fuck?
6: 16:48 WILL: A little of sugar...
7: 16:50 SAM: What is all this money? What am I into?
8: 16:50 WILL: I need a PrePaid mobile if I wanna do this well.
9: 16:55 SAM: to see what I find here…
10: 16:58 SAM: a driving licence… Everything OK for the moment.. Wait a second.. false, obviously.
11: 17:00 SAM: doesn’t matter the exam: this is more important than my exam. I have to go at the police now!
LLUÏSA TORRENTS RUBIO
Last month Claire, a secret spy of the FBI, met the boy of her dreams: Tom. He was so kind, friendly and lovely. He always made her laugh. Claire was really in love with him.
Yesterday they went to the cinema. While they were coming back by car, Tom remembered that he need to buy something. He didn’t tell Claire what he needed so she was worry about it. Tom got off the car and he went to the shop. Claire stayed in the car. Suddenly, she found a mysterious briefcase. She opened it and she found inside it one million of dollars. Then she found the papers of the car. She realized that that car weren’t the Tom’s car. She though that the car and the money had been stolen by Tom. At that time she felt so angry. Claire though that Tom was a liar, and he used her because she was an FBI spy. But how did Tom know about her job? When Tom came back, Claire didn’t hesitate, she arrested him. Tom was very surprised when he saw his girlfriend with a gun in her hands. She interrogated him about the money and the car.Then, he explained her that his job was to be a secret spy and his last work consisted to cooperate with the FBI. That money was stolen by a famous thief and he recovered it and the car was the car of a Tom’s mate because his one was broken.
They both were astonished. They started to laugh a lot. Incredible! Their secret job was the same and they didn’t need to hide it anymore.
While Jean, her boyfriend got down her car, Kate who was angry with him because he obligates her to get out the party was thinking to phone her friends to apologize for going so quickly. So she looked for a mobile phone but she didn’t find it, then she saw a familiar bag and she opened it... Meanwhile Jean in the supermarket was thinking about the money that he found in Kate’s flat and why did she have all that fortune. In the car, Kate found her money and she worried about whether Jean had discovered her, so she looked for the keys of the car to leave but she only found a paper. At the time Jean decided to call the police and explain the situation. The police told him that his girlfriend was a wanted swindler, but Jean didn’t believe it. Five minutes later, the police arrested Kate.
Mar Torres Lopez
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